whate you said i could be in the story too
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Well, when everyone was a vampire, you were too. So, technically, you ARE in it. ^-^;
prety good.
Thanx.
Good story.I alwayS love ending like that.^.^
Thank you. At least someone ELSE does. ^-^;
cool
Thanx.
SWEET!
you should keep doing stories your really good at it!
Thanks! ^-^
Amazing! :D
You're really good at making stories. I'd love to read more. =)
Thank you! :3
Don't worry, you'll read alot more. :)
heh, cool, liked it a lot.
Thanks. ^-^
ALUCARD=DRACULA. I realize this now nice story BTW keep goin bro
Thanks. And btw, this was only a two part Halloween story. -_-;
If you put me in this make me a hybrid that would be awesome
That was so cool! Also I put up a new comic!
Thank you! ^-^
I'll go check it out.
NEW POST
Hey im a Vampire :(
I know.
cool i always like to read you storys
btw can you put me in your next story
ps.new post
Thanks for the complement.
I'll go look at your post now.
Hurray! *hugs* :3
*hugs back* Hurray! :D
I no like this time, sorry.
I knew you no like this time. That okay.
HELLO,
LUV YOUR STORIES!
THANK YOU! ^-^
Anyhoo, so hear about teh devil being mah bitch?
Say, wah?!
THE DEVIL IS MAH BITCH!
Errhhmmm..............okay.......
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51430
Very well done. It always pleases me to see a story that isn't my own.
However, I do have one suggestion for it.
Instead of keeping their lines of speech single-spaced between each-other like this;
A: A
B: B
C: C
I recommend double-spacing their lines of speech, like this;
A: A
B: B
C: C
This makes the story slightly easier to read. I perform it on my story, myself.
You don't have to use that if you don't want to, but it helps. ^_^
I also liked the anime series you posted previously, but considering how i've seen that Dead Space anime, it's not really as gripping and scary compared to that...
But then again, the Dead Space one is basically bloodthirsty mindless killing... (O_O)
Hehe... Well, anyways, I hope to see more! :D
SuperSonicDude109
See more of the anime, you will! :D (lol, it's like I spoke like Yoda.)