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My Halloween Story. (PT 2)

Posted by SuperSonicDude109 - November 2nd, 2008


For those who haven't seen part one, here it is. Now it's time for part two.
Me: My best friend, eh? Hehehe.....*teleports to Shadowbanes's (A.K.A. Battle The Hedgehog.) house*
Battle: Hmmm....I sense a disturbance...........
Me: *appears* Hello, Battle.....
Battle: SSD......you......your form......what are you......
Me: *walks to him* What? Do you not like my vampire form?
Battle: *eyes widen* Vampire.....form...?!
Me: Heheheheheheh....HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *bites deep into his neck*
Battle: ARRRGGHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! *tries to punch me, but misses since he's in deep pain*
Me: *lets go of Battle*
Battle: *turns into a vampire* This power......this bloodlust....I.....I LOVE IT!!!
Me: Me too, my vampire friend.
*we both teleport to Kingzant's house*
Kingzant: Hi, SSD! :3
Me and Battle: Hello, Kingzant.....
Kingzant: What's wrong?
Me: Nothing's wrong....for us at least. *laughs maniacally as Battle grabs him by the neck*
Kingzant: What the.....*gags*
Me: *laughs demonically and bites deep into his neck*
Kingzant: ARRGGHH!!!! *turns into a vampire* Hehehehe....any necks for me?
Me: Oh, believe me, my friend. There are many necks to come......
*later on that evening, each house kept having an "ARGGHHH!!!" coming from it. Dracula was laughing demonically as he heard his brilliant plan unfold, but then, someone snapped before they would get bitten.....*
*at Technolife's* technolife: It can't be true.....SSD, and everyone else......vampires......*hears loud baning from her door*
Me: We all know your in there, technolife! Open the door!!
technolife: *starts to cry excessively* SSD......it's.....true.....you are a vampire....and you bit the neck of all my friends......I must set this straight......*goes over to her closet and gets a wooden steak* I must kill Dracula!!!!! *gets on a warp star and flies away on it*
Me: *bursts through the door and sees she got away* Damn....she's gone....let's track her down!!!!
*all vampires fly after her*
technolife: *flies faster on the warp star, and arrives at Dracula's castle*
Dracula: Ahhh, technolife. Welcome to my beloved castle, my dear.
technolife: STFU, Dracula! I'm here to stop you! *points steak at him*
Dracula: Come and get me, my dear. My apprentices are almost here, so hurry.....
technolife: *charges at him, but the vampires come bursting through and chase her*
technolife: AHHHHHHHHHHHHGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!! *stabs Dracula, but at the same time, gets bitten in the neck by me, Battle, and Shadow1441 (A.K.A. Arisu), then theres a dead silence. But then, Dracula turns to dust and everyone turns back to normal*
Me: Ugghhhh.....what happened?
technolife: That doesn't matter. All that matters is that your okay, my warrior. *hugs me*
*later that night, at midnight, everyone was partying at Sonic's*
Silver: *burp* I should'nt have had all the candy.....
Shadow: You always eat the candy every year, Silver. -_-
Dkfan: Yeah, leave some for us! *everyone laughs*
technolife: Happy Halloween, my warrior. ^/////^
Me: Happy Halloween to you too, my little angel. ^//////^
*we kiss passionately under the moonlight as the words "The End" appear on the moon*
The end.....
There ya'll go! Sorry if it's not as good as the first part. ^-^;
Also if you haven't seen episode two of When They Cry yet, http://supersonicdude109.newgrounds.co m/news/post/218791

Hope you all enjoyed!
Peace Out!
SSD

My Halloween Story. (PT 2)


Comments

Very well done. It always pleases me to see a story that isn't my own.

However, I do have one suggestion for it.

Instead of keeping their lines of speech single-spaced between each-other like this;

A: A
B: B
C: C

I recommend double-spacing their lines of speech, like this;

A: A

B: B

C: C

This makes the story slightly easier to read. I perform it on my story, myself.

You don't have to use that if you don't want to, but it helps. ^_^

I also liked the anime series you posted previously, but considering how i've seen that Dead Space anime, it's not really as gripping and scary compared to that...

But then again, the Dead Space one is basically bloodthirsty mindless killing... (O_O)

Hehe... Well, anyways, I hope to see more! :D

See more of the anime, you will! :D (lol, it's like I spoke like Yoda.)

whate you said i could be in the story too

Well, when everyone was a vampire, you were too. So, technically, you ARE in it. ^-^;

prety good.

Thanx.

Good story.I alwayS love ending like that.^.^

Thank you. At least someone ELSE does. ^-^;

cool

Thanx.

SWEET!

you should keep doing stories your really good at it!

Thanks! ^-^

Amazing! :D

You're really good at making stories. I'd love to read more. =)

Thank you! :3
Don't worry, you'll read alot more. :)

heh, cool, liked it a lot.

Thanks. ^-^

ALUCARD=DRACULA. I realize this now nice story BTW keep goin bro

Thanks. And btw, this was only a two part Halloween story. -_-;

If you put me in this make me a hybrid that would be awesome

That was so cool! Also I put up a new comic!

Thank you! ^-^
I'll go check it out.

NEW POST

Hey im a Vampire :(

I know.

cool i always like to read you storys
btw can you put me in your next story

ps.new post

Thanks for the complement.
I'll go look at your post now.

Hurray! *hugs* :3

*hugs back* Hurray! :D

I no like this time, sorry.

I knew you no like this time. That okay.

HELLO,
LUV YOUR STORIES!

THANK YOU! ^-^

Anyhoo, so hear about teh devil being mah bitch?

Say, wah?!

THE DEVIL IS MAH BITCH!

Errhhmmm..............okay.......
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